✯✯SHARKS Web Series Episode Two✯✯

No offense, but Caroline would maybe benefit from a few acting lessons.
Other than that, i like the show a lot. I hope it develops into something really big.
Jennifer is awesome b.t.w. I really think she's got what it takes to make it as a "real" actor if she wanted to.
 
Thank you

Thank you very much. The stories and characters hopfully will be more and more interesting. I have a lot of respect for the players who agreed to act in this who have no interest in being actors and just did it to help further the game and have some fun. I really appreciate them as well as the actors.

Thanks,
Jim
 
jimM said:
Thank you very much. The stories and characters hopfully will be more and more interesting. I have a lot of respect for the players who agreed to act in this who have no interest in being actors and just did it to help further the game and have some fun. I really appreciate them as well as the actors.

Thanks,
Jim
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You are very welcome Jim!
 
I have such a crush on Jennifer Barretta.

If your looking for some handsome guy to play her new boyfriend keep me in mind. :thumbup:
 
Jim btw great work so far. Production quality is great! I only have one suggestion, I am by no means a director but have worked with producing company videos.

I am assuming that this is shot with a single camera. This makes it difficult for the actors to react to the dialog as it happens. If they are not conversing with someone it makes it hard for them to react to the conversation naturally. Which makes their acting look forced or disjointed. Take it for what it is worth I suggest shooting the scenes with both actors in the scene or have someone read the other persons dialog while filming the featured actor so their reactions look more natural. Having them read lines in a scene is putting a lot of pressure on them to try and act natural.
 
Thanks

Johnny "V" said:
Jim btw great work so far. Production quality is great! I only have one suggestion, I am by no means a director but have worked with producing company videos.

I am assuming that this is shot with a single camera. This makes it difficult for the actors to react to the dialog as it happens. If they are not conversing with someone it makes it hard for them to react to the conversation naturally. Which makes their acting look forced or disjointed. Take it for what it is worth I suggest shooting the scenes with both actors in the scene or have someone read the other persons dialog while filming the featured actor so their reactions look more natural. Having them read lines in a scene is putting a lot of pressure on them to try and act natural.
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Thanks for the advice. We are trying to make each one better.

Jim
 
Catchy music. LOL!!~!! kelsey is funny. Silly broad, stop messing with other guys' girls. That was probably the funniest scene I've seen in a long time.
 
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Well, it'll never take over from "Days", as my wife calls the show...but it was fun. Bob, thanks for the heads up! :grin:
 
Absolutely love it! Will watch every episode.

So cool that you show a safety battle.

Suggestions: The editing is off time. As a musician you can hear when the timing sounds off. If it were edited with the responses coming about a second faster the acting would seem a lot better.

Nitpicking: The bartender's volume is way low and Borana's lighting or make up is not working in certain angles. She looks great in some shots but then it's exactly like the Seinfeld where the girl he is dating only looks good in certain booths of the restaurant.

Anyway, thank you sooooo much for all the hard work everybody put into this. Can't wait to see how it evolves.
 
Looking good so far! I really like that there was actual pool playing and safeties. Yay for a show about pool that shows it being played!
 
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