Looking for input....

[Billiard Architect]

Working on a new project. Starting out with some drills so on. I posted a video on YouTube and was wondering if I am targeting the market properly. Below is a link to the video. Let me know if I properly explain myself and if it makes sense.

https://youtu.be/7lf3ZF7LLHQ

This video is not live and the only way to get to it is via the link above.

 

[couldnthinkof01]

You sound clear. What you are talking about
makes sense. Cool idea.

Critiques- zoom out a bit. (angle might be bad too)
Add a little more light.

 

[Bob Jewett]

... Let me know if I properly explain myself and if it makes sense....

I won't do that but I will point out that you have about 15 seconds of video to get the viewer hooked on what you're saying. Few viewers are interested in cutting out paper dolls.

 

[David in FL]

I won't do that but I will point out that you have about 15 seconds of video to get the viewer hooked on what you're saying. Few viewers are interested in cutting out paper dolls.

Some of us have even shorter attention spans than that!

 

[poolcuekid3275]

Working on a new project. Starting out with some drills so on. I posted a video on YouTube and was wondering if I am targeting the market properly. Below is a link to the video. Let me know if I properly explain myself and if it makes sense.

https://youtu.be/7lf3ZF7LLHQ

This video is not live and the only way to get to it is via the link above.

Just my opinion, but it just looks like it would help a player to straighten out their stroke. Doing drills with that would really help a player straighten out their stroke.

 

[Billiard Architect]

I won't do that but I will point out that you have about 15 seconds of video to get the viewer hooked on what you're saying. Few viewers are interested in cutting out paper dolls.

Ok my next one I will put a car chase in the beginning. Paper dolls... You crack me up Bob!

 

[Bob Jewett]

Ok my next one I will put a car chase in the beginning. ...

As in, "cut to the chase"? Excellent.