LP Custom Cues New Website

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LPCUSTOMCUES

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Just wanted everyone to know about my new website.

It was actually done for me by another AZ member, OrigZaphod.

I think he did a great job.

There are some new pics and prices.

Here is the direct link................

http://www.lpcustomcues.com

Thanks
Lee
 
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I think it looks okay for your first website! I don't like how the first letter of very word is capitalised, though. It makes it harder to read. I looked it over and found these errors that you should to fix when you have a moment. Yes, I'm a huge nerd.

Home: "Spiritual" is misspelled at the bottom twice (as Spritiual).

Cue's (sic) In Progress: No apostrophe is needed in "cues".

Who We Are: "Don't" should have an apostrophe.

Prices Page: Abalone is misspelled (as abelone).

Cues For Sale Page: "Sale" within the tab should be capitalised to maintain continuity.

Contact Page: Tab should be capitalised to maintain continuity. "Requesting" and "information" are misspelled.

Wood Types Page: The last sentence for the Hard Maple and Bocote sections need periods. The final sentence at the bottom is a run-on and needs a period after "available".
 
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Marissa,

I knew you would be the one to find the little typos for me. :) Thanks working on them now. Would have caught them but did the site in two days for him..

Dennis
 
OrigZaphod said:
Marissa,

I knew you would be the one to find the little typos for me. :) Thanks working on them now. Would have caught them but did the site in two days for him..

Dennis
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No problem! First one's for free ;) What program do you use to build your websites?
 
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not bad at all... may i say i LOVE your prices!

i may just have to invest in one of your cues soon... i wish I could get a feel for how one hits ...
 
Issues Fixed. :)

Marissa, this one was done mostly in notepad. Usually use homesite for more detailed sites.
 
Your cues and your site look great; the prices are really reasonable too!

Marissa missed another typo under the veneered cue price list. You have delrin listed twice under buttcap.:wink:

Good luck with your sales, I hope you do well!
 
I will go through that, i didnt write section. :)

Also changed the gallery for anyone who didnt see the new one yet...
 
I hate notepad. Especially with XHTML's stupid archaic "must close code with backslash" crap.
 
One thing I would like to suggest is, having better pictures. When you zoom the pictures they are all distorted. Other then that, I really like the looks and prices of your cues. Best of luck.

Shane


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Please stop bumping all of your threads several times a day already. It's in your signature; that should be enough. I no longer think you're looking for opinions on your website as much as you are trying to sell your cues. Your contribution to this forum so far has been a bunch of "bump" posts for what you are selling or for your website. If you're going to do that, at least buy a banner.
 
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LPCUSTOMCUES said:
Just wanted everyone to know about my new website.

It was actually done for me by another AZ member, OrigZaphod.

I think he did a great job.

There are some new pics and prices.

Here is the direct link................

http://www.lpcustomcues.com

Thanks
Lee
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Your pictures are terribly out of focus and when you click for the close up you can't even tell what you are looking at. They also should be done with nice complementing backgrounds. These were taken on a dirty wood floor. You need to do a lot of work to make that presentable.

Also, isn't this a picture of a picture of a cue with a broken ferrule?
http://www.lpcustomcues.com/Gallery/Completed/13_006
 
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macguy said:
Your pictures are terribly out of focus and when you click for the close up you can't even tell what you are looking at. They also should be done with nice complementing backgrounds. These were taken on a dirty wood floor. You need to do a lot of work to make that presentable.

Also, isn't this a picture of a picture of a cue with a broken ferrule?
http://www.lpcustomcues.com/Gallery/Completed/13_006
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I am working on the picture problems.
The line on the ferrule is a chuck mark.
Thanks
 
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