Pool Haiku

pool said:
Hey, these are pretty good. I notice some ppl are a bit lax on the syllable count, but it's the right spirit!

Pool steps up to play
Snaps three on break, good setup
Damn! Dogs nine again
Today's haiku form
syllables not so stringent
imagery is key


In other words, the above wouldn't constitute a haiku in anyone's definition.

The cueball is safe
His object ball is hidden
Jump shots should be banned

Eh, a little better, a little imagery, and a little emotion.

The heat stays outdoors
I'm comfy in the A/C
Shooting pool ... is cool

Fred <~~~ won't shoot pool today
 
across the green field
the round, colorful flock hurries
to their waiting homes

Pool, I'm from Pgh. a long time ago. Lived in Penn Hills. Started shooting pool in Wilkinsburg at a place called Sands Cue and Cushion. That's another story. Can't believe you have these pool shootin' mugs writing Haikus.
 
Not a Haiku, but...

A Man and His Tool

I slide it through my hands with excited anticipation
The smoothness of the shaft feels me with exhilaration
It's an extension of me, my sword, my staff
The bond I have with it causes some to chuckle, some to all out laugh
It's the tool of my passion, it does the work, gets the job done
When it slides through just right I know that I have won
When I stroke it perfectly it is truly a work of art
Now that I am in my rhythm it is time for us to start
I lean over and with a thrust it goes in the hole
Taking my time for something like this must be done nice and slow
Some thrusts are fast and hard, others are slow and gentle
Yet the thing to remember is this task is 90% mental
As the climax becomes near I prepare for my last thrust
My position feels wrong so I take a moment to adjust
With one final stroke the ball heads toward the pocket
Nothing can stop it it's aimed just like a rocket
The game is over, victory is mine
The satisfaction I feel makes it well worth my time!
More balls are racked, I chalk up my tip
I pull the trigger, I crack the whip
The balls spread across the table setting up another run
I look at my opponent and smile, it's time to have some fun
 
12310bch said:
across the green field
the round, colorful flock hurries
to their waiting homes

Pool, I'm from Pgh. a long time ago. Lived in Penn Hills. Started shooting pool in Wilkinsburg at a place called Sands Cue and Cushion. That's another story. Can't believe you have these pool shootin' mugs writing Haikus.


Yeah, I don't think that place is still around. To hear it told, many of the old rooms have gone long ago in the area. I get out to Breakers in Dormont every now and then, though. It is great that everyone has been creative enough to post a little haiku for the fun of it. This makes me think of another one...

Old rooms dark and cool
Great battles long ago fought
No more pool there now
 
AC on sub-zero
The bigg'r the shirt the better
BLAST - foul on all balls

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