obclassicut...Number one; wrong setup to get any feedback from instructors. We need to see your whole shooting arm, including your wrist, from camera angle side (setting up the camera to record games doesn't show much, in terms of the questions you're asking). If you want instructor feedback, set the camera up correctly, and shoot the same shot with different tip positions and different speeds. Number two; why is the camera pointed at the floor? We don't need to see anything other than the shooting surface of the table...not the ball return, table legs, or the floor. Number three; from what I can see, you're still doing the jab/poke stroke thing. You need to find your natural finish, and work on making it happen, every time you shoot a normal shot.:grin-square:
Scott Lee
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