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Excitingly, I'm going to make an old book (1902) available on Amazon print on demand (the demand being a landslide that may eventually reach double figures!—Still, I want to make it the best I can.)

Please could I have your feedback on covers and the short introductory and concluding blurb I'm adding.

Covers: The choice is modern or old-style. My photoshop skills are very limited, so the old design probably doesn't get much better than the picture here (a proof copy I've had done). The new copy was an earlier attempt using a cover wizard, but I now have the skills to reproduce it with a better font. I can also do the old cover in gloss finish instead of matte.

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The introductory and concluding blurb are below. In the introduction, I'm trying to balance giving people enough context for the games and currencies/amounts, without boring them or making them feel they have to memorize stuff . Is it too much info, too little, or about right? (In particular, I could drop crown, sovereign and guinea, although all come up in the text.) Thanks in advance.

INTRODUCTION TO THE 2022 EDITION​

William Mitchell’s game, English billiards, is played with three balls on a 12x6 foot table. Points are earned by making cannons (hitting both other balls), pocketing another ball (a “winning hazard”) and pocketing your cue ball in-off another (a “losing hazard”—a good thing, despite the name). A game of “100 up” is a race to 100 points.

In the 1870s and ’80s, “pool” is not yet synonymous with all pocket billiards games. Rather, it refers to a popular gambling game for several players. Each player has a cue ball and tries to pocket a particular opponent’s ball to make him lose a life.

£1 (or a sovereign) is roughly an average weekly wage, and smaller amounts are in crowns or shillings (s.) and pence (d.). A guinea is slightly more than a pound, and is considered a more gentlemanly amount.

EPILOGUE TO THE 2022 EDITION​

In the early 1900s, following publication of his Reminiscences, William Mitchell spent several years playing billiards in South Africa. In Johannesburg, 1918, he was knocked down by a tramcar and seriously injured, and subsequently returned to England. In old age he endured financial hardship and he died in 1931, age 76.
 
Depending on how deeply into game situations Mitchell got, you may want to add an appendix with a more complete rule set. If you do that, it may be necessary to point out the differences between the game then and today.
 
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Looks great and good luck! I don't remember the Amazon print-on-demand prices off-hand, but I suggest using the cheapest options for printing and the cover material. I don't think your customers will care. I fussed over the cover for my Greenleaf book for too long and didn't like the final result--but no one complained about it. Also the Amazon tool for publishing an ebook for Kindle is quite easy to use.
 
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Depending on how deeply into game situations Mitchell got, you may want to add an appendix with a more complete rule set. If you do that, it may be necessary to point out the differences between the game then and today.
I was going to say that hardly anyone plays English billiards at all now (so hardly anyone would know the new rules), but on the other hand, those few might be my only customers!
Mitchell doesn't go into great detail, and to people who do play English billiards, the history about the different rules for consecutive spot shots should be obvious (and if not, the old rules should be reasonably obvious from context), so I think I'll get away with it :)
 
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Looks great and good luck! I don't remember the Amazon print-on-demand prices off-hand, but I suggest using the cheapest options for printing and the cover material. I don't think your customers will care. I fussed over the cover for my Greenleaf book for too long and didn't like the final result--but no one complained about it. Also the Amazon tool for publishing an ebook for Kindle is quite easy to use.
Thank you!
I'm prepped for a kindle version too (mostly as a learning exercise for my own benefit). I extracted the text from PDF scans and proof-read carefully.

A couple of points have been dilemmas. I've had strong hunches about the cover and a point in the content, but the hunches differ from my 'objective' judgement. I think I'm going to go with my hunches, and it's fine because it's not a high-stakes project, but if I had the same dilemma on a bigger decision it'd be a real head-scratcher.

I liked your book cover. It's distinctive and professional-looking. I think as a designer, you're judging every element against all the alternatives, but as a buyer, you just take the whole thing as a proposition that either works or doesn't. (In your case it looks good!)
 
Thank you!
I'm prepped for a kindle version too (mostly as a learning exercise for my own benefit). I extracted the text from PDF scans and proof-read carefully.

A couple of points have been dilemmas. I've had strong hunches about the cover and a point in the content, but the hunches differ from my 'objective' judgement. I think I'm going to go with my hunches, and it's fine because it's not a high-stakes project, but if I had the same dilemma on a bigger decision it'd be a real head-scratcher.

I liked your book cover. It's distinctive and professional-looking. I think as a designer, you're judging every element against all the alternatives, but as a buyer, you just take the whole thing as a proposition that either works or doesn't. (In your case it looks good!)

Make sure you post a link when the book goes live!
 
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Make sure you post a link when the book goes live!
Thanks, I will.

By the way, did you use the Kindle Preview software for your ebook, and if so did you find it was a good likeness for the kindle version?

I've used some 'smallcaps' font to match the formatting in the original book, which shows up in Kindle Preview, but gets lost when I use Kindle Create. And there will probably be one image. Annoyingly, we're a one-kindle household and it's linked to my wife's Amazon account, so we might have to buy the thing to see it on a real Kindle.
 
Thanks, I will.

By the way, did you use the Kindle Preview software for your ebook, and if so did you find it was a good likeness for the kindle version?

I've used some 'smallcaps' font to match the formatting in the original book, which shows up in Kindle Preview, but gets lost when I use Kindle Create. And there will probably be one image. Annoyingly, we're a one-kindle household and it's linked to my wife's Amazon account, so we might have to buy the thing to see it on a real Kindle.

I used Kindle Create, which let me preview how the book would show up in different Kindle formats. I think one of the features of Kindle is that the user can always select the text size and font, so you won't be able to fix it to a certain style. If you have the time, I would try to make sure the book looks OK on phone, kindle, and tablet sizes (e.g., no weird gaps or unreadable portions). I wasn't ever able to get it 100% perfect, so depending on your screen size and selected font size, my book has some half page or even full page gaps. But no one's complained about that yet--it's par for the course with most ebooks.
 
When you say check it on phone, kindle, and tablet, do you mean a real device, rather than the preview software?
 
are you F.M.Hotline?
Haha, I only aspire to be F. M. Hotine.

(He wrote/edited a few English billiards books in the early 1900s, and seemed to have a really good nose for what makes a good book. He had one book of billiard shots that had the bare minimum explanatory text, and is really nice to read because of it, and he has a comment in the Mitchell book I did about only making the minimal necessary changes to Mitchell's words, which I think is the same approach as Byrne took to McGoorty. In both cases, the results are great. Somehow, it's easy to be dismissive of how intelligent people in the distant past were - you just come to expect rapid progress in society and extrapolate back from that. But then you start learning a bit...)
 
Thank you!
Also, you got the 'real' version way faster than me! I think they must put author copies to the back of the list (I guess because they only charge the print cost). Mine are due Friday 😭
 
Thank you!
Also, you got the 'real' version way faster than me! I think they must put author copies to the back of the list (I guess because they only charge the print cost). Mine are due Friday 😭

That was my experience as well with my book.
 
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That was my experience as well with my book.
I've got mine now. A week and a half, even with expedited shipping! Overall, given my complete lack of experience before starting the project, it's turned out really nice.

I'd be interested in what you think of the text when you've had a chance to read it.
 
I've got mine now. A week and a half, even with expedited shipping! Overall, given my complete lack of experience before starting the project, it's turned out really nice.

I'd be interested in what you think of the text when you've had a chance to read it.

I brought the book with me on a trip and think you did a great job with the typesetting and layout. I haven't seen anything out of place or unreadable.
 
I brought the book with me on a trip and think you did a great job with the typesetting and layout. I haven't seen anything out of place or unreadable.
Thank you! I was working from jpegs from an old microfilm scan of the original book (the book itself is very rare), so most of the work was straightening out and cleaning up the images. I wanted to use the original scans rather than just using the extracted text (which I did get out with OCR for the kindle version) in order to be authentic to the original. (Although the new introduction and epilogue were typeset for the best match I could find with normal computer fonts.)

The only place the 'halfway authentic recreation' approach fell down was the front cover, which was missing from the scan and I've still never seen! (The back cover is 'original'. I've been tempted to pick up some of the other books advertised there!)
 
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