Hey Jon, hope you are doing well. Some comments for you:
1st rack - looked like when you shot the 2, you didn't use enough speed to move the cue ball much. Definitely should have gotten close to the 3, would have made getting back down to the 4 much easier
2nd rack - again, small positional error going from 5 to 6. Just remember you would rather be a little too far above then not get high enough. You made 3 tough shots/banks to get out, not something to rely on...
3rd rack - I would have tried to break up that cluster with softer speed, concentrating on hitting the 9 on the bottom side, that way you end up with a nice shot on the 2. Using that higher speed is risky.
4th rack - Nice, but again needed a few power strokes that could have been avoided with better position
5th rack - Again, small positional errors, wrong side of the line, requiring more difficult shots and transitions
Overall looked pretty good, just try to focus on staying in line a bit more, maybe checking angles on critical shots from different vantage points, pay attention to your angles so you are able to move more naturally between the shots instead of needing that hard power stroke as often. Save that for a rainy day...
Take care,
Scott