Latest Shirt Design
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that is quite a collection of different fonts. I don't love font clutter...
What? I don't look like Tom??
Suggestions On How To Make This Design Work Better?
The design is intended to play on the word Heart and the movie Wizard of Oz, where the Tin Man says - "if I only had a heart".....
We all know it takes Heart to play at top levels......... this design is something I wanted to do, because a local hustler, says it often to people, and I really loved the saying....
It goes something like this: A lesser player ask for stupid weight or spot, and the hustler says "You'd Better Go See The Wizard!" obviously saying they need some heart.
Any suggestions on how to improve this, or get the idea across and still appeal to pool players would be awesome..
The design is intended to play on the word Heart and the movie Wizard of Oz, where the Tin Man says - "if I only had a heart".....
We all know it takes Heart to play at top levels......... this design is something I wanted to do, because a local hustler, says it often to people, and I really loved the saying....
It goes something like this: A lesser player ask for stupid weight or spot, and the hustler says "You'd Better Go See The Wizard!" obviously saying they need some heart.
Any suggestions on how to improve this, or get the idea across and still appeal to pool players would be awesome..
Hmmm.... I like the idea! But the heart looks a bit girly. Perhaps something more like an X-ray type picture of a real heart.
Then change the back to: you'd better go ask the wizard if he has any left.
Then change the back to: you'd better go ask the wizard if he has any left.
On the front, make the logo smaller and put it up in the right corner, over the wearers heart. With the large logo on the front it looks too much like tourist fashion.
Perhaps an "edgier" heart symbol would be good, like an image of a real heart, or a hand squeezing a heart..symbolic blood drip..etc...
On the back, add something that more clearly suggests a relation to the movie... Maybe an image of emerald city in the distance...yellow brick road...maybe even a tin man..etc.
Just my umble opinion.
Btw, I'm looking for a shirt producer/distributor.
Perhaps an "edgier" heart symbol would be good, like an image of a real heart, or a hand squeezing a heart..symbolic blood drip..etc...
On the back, add something that more clearly suggests a relation to the movie... Maybe an image of emerald city in the distance...yellow brick road...maybe even a tin man..etc.
Just my umble opinion.
Btw, I'm looking for a shirt producer/distributor.
Just needs some pool related stuff incorporated to......couple of 8 balls, a pool cue, something.....otherwise kinda cool
What it needs is a hand holding a beating human heart that looks like it's coming out of your chest. Maybe put a 10-ball in the middle of the heart or whatever ball you prefer.
On the back it should say.........if you don't have any heart I've got one for you. Or something to that effect.
It does look a little girly like it is.
On the back it should say.........if you don't have any heart I've got one for you. Or something to that effect.
It does look a little girly like it is.
I don't think most people will get it, and the wearer will have to explain it a lot. I also think the heart looks a little girly. It's an interesting idea, but I don't see it going over well.
There is a Heart shirt from Universe already.. granted I didn't notice it had a Rodney Morris quote when I picked them up for the better half and kid but they made great rags....
Chris
Yea I get it..It wasn't that hard to figure out lol but there is no mention of pool and it just doesn't look like something I or most men would wear