you shouldn't put the contact info on a logo. think of a logo in terms of a patch you could put on a jacket.
and have you tried other views,,,,like a more profile ball with a fuller (9)
the "9" has no weight. it should be heavier.
there are too many lines and the 9ball face is getting crowded. probably one reason is you decided to put yellow on a grey ball. it's difficult enough to see yellow on white, but when you put it on grey it's even worse......so you had to add lines to make the yellow stand out. if you want to keep the image,,,i'd 1...change the grey to white and 2...change the white background to something dark. this might also necessitate a change in the font color.
i don't mind the "cartoonishness", if that's how you targeted your demographic.
and have you tried other views,,,,like a more profile ball with a fuller (9)
the "9" has no weight. it should be heavier.
there are too many lines and the 9ball face is getting crowded. probably one reason is you decided to put yellow on a grey ball. it's difficult enough to see yellow on white, but when you put it on grey it's even worse......so you had to add lines to make the yellow stand out. if you want to keep the image,,,i'd 1...change the grey to white and 2...change the white background to something dark. this might also necessitate a change in the font color.
i don't mind the "cartoonishness", if that's how you targeted your demographic.
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