Hi Mark, 1st of all, that camera angle is no good, try to put the camera somewhere on the top rail, on a table or even that trash box there.
You have good rhythm and a nice stroke.
I think you waited too long to clear those 3 balls at the top rail, that can cost you easily...always try to open up problems as early as you can and shoot balls on the rails early also. As for a key ball, i like side pocket shots where you can almost stop the cueball. Your keyball in the 1st rack worked, too but you could misjudge speed easy there. I would have used the 6 into the side as key. At 8:26 you shot the ball in without knowing what to shoot next...you broke em nice earlier, take your time there, see if you have a break and keyball, if not figure out a way to get it. Also very important is that ball near the left side pocket. you have to get rid off it asap ! when you shot the 5 i think it is, i would have played high right to catch the 10 slightly and open those 2 balls up. instead you rattled that side pocket shot and had another shot after to break up those 2 balls. often you get a double kiss there and bad position...the cueball hits the rail and the 10 is very close, could easily tie up to the cueball there...you played a nice shot on the keyball to the breakball, but again, very dangerous to come up short or too far. I would have played those 2 balls on the right side and break em again with your keyball. With draw back into the rack and to the right siderail. But that is preference...at 14:32 you really jumped up there....Stay down and FOLLOW THROUGH on thes shots..at 16:13 i would have shot that in the corner, draw back slightly to bump the 6. That puts the 8 down as a breakshot, you have insurance balls with that ball on the rail, the 1 and maybe even the 6, depending on where you hit it when you break em up. By not breaking em up and shooting other balls taht caused the run to end. Like i said, get to the problems asap, the more balls you shoot in, the less options you have later on.
All that is not meant to critsize you too much, i just want to point out some things to you. It´s a nice run there, you will get feedback...pay attention to it. You can also watch a lot of runs here from different guys that will help you and of course accu stats videos.
Keep it up man, higher numbers to come soon for sure. :thumbup: