Eric, fine job.
I give your writing a B, only because of some grammar and punctuation issues, which are minor. Your entire post is very easily read and understood, so the little mistakes are only nit-picky in nature. You said you would like opinions on your writing, as you had been working on it, and that is the only reason I would ever mention it. The errors are truly that inconsequential, especially for a post on an internet forum. they do not detract from the meaning of what you have written, or make it more difficult to read.
The content, however, gets you a grade of A+. I love your perspective, and how you explained what you felt about differences in cues. And I truly hope you are correct, because I'm working on becoming a better player, and am following your theory regarding my own cue purchases.
Nicely done.
(Since I was going to try and give my opinions on your writing, I had to make sure I wasn't doing anything too badly myself. How did I do?)
IBID, Well said.
Nice job Eric.
-don