Really like the second one, have seen the first more than a dozen times on TV, It really bothers me that the way the table lays on first view, if the cue goes outside the 8 ball then between the 3 and 10, it would end up hitting a diamond off side pocket not corner pocket noticed this the first time I saw the spot has bothered me ever since.
I guess you missed the point of the commercial, it wasn't about promoting pool correctness.