You must be kidding.....right?
57 minutes of random.
Here's what I see just as a starter.
1. Pump handle stroke that's all over the place. Crazy wild.
2. No process to shoot with.
3. No eye pattern at all.
4. You are very careless at the table.
5. You sure pocket some shots very well.
6. Bridge is way too long some times.
Way too much to digest. A 2 minute vid with the camera on your shooting side tells us a lot more than random.
I will try to help if you try to condense this thing down a bit.
Thanks
randyg