✯✯SHARKS Web Series Episode Four✯✯

...and the plot thickens :thumbup:. Jack Cooney would be proud.

Keep 'em coming!

Dave
 
Let's support Jim in this endeavor. Good production and decent display of pool. Acting will likely improve, as the series unfolds.
 
I have been watching them and although they are not my cup of tea I still check them out, it is a good effort. The likes and dislike button though has not been too kind to this series, not sure if its haters or a general consensus on people liking it or not. Usually when I check out videos online this always stands out for me, if the dislikes are more than half then I usually just move on to the next video.
 

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Keep it going!

cmbwsu said:
Episode #1: http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v=4lIwrTujLi8&feature=share

Episode #2: http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v=_R9duppDD5A&feature=uploademail

Episode #3: http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v=1e4xfMotG9o&feature=uploademail

Episode #4: http://www.youtube.com/watch_popup?v=o_xu0-MBSw8&feature=uploademail
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Keep it going you never know what might come out of this.

Whats the worst that can happen from this? Experience? lost time?

Keep it up Ladies & Gents you just never know what might come out of this. GOOD LUCK!
 
Finally!

yoyodude9000 said:
That's just awful
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Thank You! I've been waiting for someone to be honest about this! :rotflmao1:

I have made independent films before and they were mostly crap. I know how hard it is just to get crap projects completed, especially when you have a large majority of people working for free or next to nothing. But you have to have self realization and know when something is not working and move onto the next (hopefully better) project. Drop this series and try something different. Keep the better actors and dump the bad ones. Technically it's not bad, most of the fault lies with the writing and acting. And drop the half hour intro credits, get right to the story, because I can guarantee you that most people have hit stop before the story even starts. Put 2 hours of credits at the end if you want. IMHO of course. ;)
 
loving every minute of it.

Just liked all four episodes on youtube
 
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I feel like I am watching a pool soap opera. A bit too much drama between the sexes. The dialog also seems weak. On a bright note Jen delivers her lines pretty darn well, way better than all the others combined.
 
Thanks

schmizz said:
Thank You! I've been waiting for someone to be honest about this! :rotflmao1:

I have made independent films before and they were mostly crap. I know how hard it is just to get crap projects completed, especially when you have a large majority of people working for free or next to nothing. But you have to have self realization and know when something is not working and move onto the next (hopefully better) project. Drop this series and try something different. Keep the better actors and dump the bad ones. Technically it's not bad, most of the fault lies with the writing and acting. And drop the half hour intro credits, get right to the story, because I can guarantee you that most people have hit stop before the story even starts. Put 2 hours of credits at the end if you want. IMHO of course. ;)
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I would say that maybe your opinion isn't so humble. Thanks for the encouragement. Tell me what you're working on so I can look out for it.

Jim
 
Jim,

I've been hesitant to say anything for fear of sounding negative, but I'm going to offer constructive criticism.

As others have said before, it seems it takes too long for the actors to say things. Can that be sped up some how? I really do understand that the actors are trying to show emotion and such, but it I really think switching from each actor and/or their parts could be sped up somehow.

I really liked how we finally got to a plot in this episode! It's getting exciting!

FWIW, the intro and credits I skip through every time.

I think the actors are doing the best they can - given that they aren't actors. Kudos to everyone involved - camera peeps, sound, actors, directors, writers, etc.

I was in a local pool movie and everyone bashed it, also. It's a tough line of work and a labor of love.

I wish you and the actors the best and look forward to more interweaving plots and faster "talk" so to speak.
 
Jen was pretty good before but I also noticed that she must be feeling a little more comfortable in front of the camera on ep 4.
 
LOL! All that sexual/money tension...yep, funnier than hell to me.

P.S: Episode 5 will have Johnny losing..:rolleyes:
 
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