hi all, sorry for the delayed response- life.
pool is still on the back burner, but I have some time now to respond, so I will

thanks again to all for taking the time to view and comment-
Continue to work on your fundamental. Play tighter position.
hi bob, thanks. what do you mean by tighter position? cb is what comes to mind- ?
I'm not that concerned about your grip hand position right now.
hi fran, that's good- one less thing to work on

seriously tho, is it not better to have the wrist fall in a straighter line?
Two things that jump out at me are your approach and your stroke timing.
my approach definitely needs work. from all the comments in this thread, it's clear

I wriggle around when I'm down because I don't feel comfortable re: my body and aim. my intentions are good, I think, and I guess it's been working well enough, but I will try to aim better when I'm up and step into the shot more.
Next is your stroke timing. You probably figured out early on --- maybe even subconsciously --- that a shorter, pokier, more compact-type of stroke gave you a bit more accuracy. That type of fix is temporary, and will prevent you from developing your sense of feel for individual shots. You're going to have to get yourself weaned off of that. It's not helping you progress. You are going to have to take control over your stroke for awhile and stay conscious. Start by slowing down your backstroke as if you were throwing a ball or a punch. The forward stroke is what mainly changes, due to your needs for each shot. The longer pause at the end of your backstroke helps for players who can't slow down their backstrokes, but I would prefer to see you try to slow it down before resorting to a long pause.
I used to have (and still do, at times) a long, wavy bridge/stroke- my first pool role model was my friend who had that style, and efren is my fave.
and I like that style- being a pool robot doesn't entice me. this said, I've consciously shortened my stroke for a lot of shots, to simplify things and try to prevent errors from creeping in. recently, I've also been experimenting with a pause. and I can see where my backward/forward timing could use some work.
thanks for such detailed insight and analysis.
Rewatch your video and take notice of how inconsistent your follow through is. On some shots you follow all the way through the cb, while on others you seem to hold back.
Not naturally allowing your stroke to follow through to the end means your muscles are tensing up as you're striking the cb. This could cause the tip to move and not make contact where you intend. A consistent follow through, all the way through the cb, provides more consistent results.
thanks brian, I think I see this in myself. when I watch pros break/draw, their tip often hits the felt after contacting the cb. I'm not sure if I've ever done that or not! I feel like not tho. I think part of why, at least re: draw, is that I'm afraid of miscueing. one piece of advice I've heard is to aim to strike through the cb, as if you were aiming to hit a ghost ball behind the object ball, to put a good stroke on it. any other advice about how to encourage good follow-through?
I see a waste of energy (bleeding energy). Simplify all your movements.
Keep up the hard work.
I hear you- thanks randy.
^^^^ What he said. It's like watching a walking nerve cell. Keep you're movements simple and minimal.
Calm down, stop bobbing for apples with your head. You're all tensed up, come out of the cocoon, relax.
It's a dance, a smooth rhythm, a nice flow from shot to shot.
I'm waiting for you're cue to fly through the wall and go through the neighbors pool with those air strokes.
ha, msg received

will shine up my dance shoes and work on this. hey, I like my air strokes tho ^_^
I think you would benefit greatly with live personal instruction.
word. if it weren't for covid, I'd have indulged this instinct I also have. video, maybe..I appreciate your comments, and humor- thanks.
You have excellent potential.
hey matt, appreciate the encouragement. may I ask what specifically makes you think so, tho?
You need to bring the cue stick down on the table with ZERO movement of the stick--just cue up to the cue ball so you can get your distance/tip gap to the cue ball the same for most shots.
Start there and post another video runout and I'll go from there. Thanks!
interesting..having a little trouble picturing this, but simplifying this in general seems to be a theme here..will consider- thank you.
and will post another vid when I get a chance-
thanks again, all-