I think the angle management issues are subtle in some cases. For example, I didn't like your approach on the two ball at 35:18. As you noted, that was a bad decision.
To me, the angle you should have been trying to get on the three was nearly straight so that you could draw up the long rail off of the three behind the eight onto the four. What you needed to protect against is forcing yourself to play around the five and nine as you shot the three. You appeared to hit an outside english stun draw and while you probably feel you made an error in speed, I think you also made an error in stroke selection, because without outside english, you won't end up on the wrong side of the three.
Even though you might have succeeded the way you played it, your stroke selection hurt your chances. Forgive me for nitpicking, but this is an error in pattern building. It wasn't critical to be near the three, but you needed the right angle to play the best pattern, and your approach to getting it was less than ideal.
To me, the angle you should have been trying to get on the three was nearly straight so that you could draw up the long rail off of the three behind the eight onto the four. What you needed to protect against is forcing yourself to play around the five and nine as you shot the three. You appeared to hit an outside english stun draw and while you probably feel you made an error in speed, I think you also made an error in stroke selection, because without outside english, you won't end up on the wrong side of the three.
Even though you might have succeeded the way you played it, your stroke selection hurt your chances. Forgive me for nitpicking, but this is an error in pattern building. It wasn't critical to be near the three, but you needed the right angle to play the best pattern, and your approach to getting it was less than ideal.