Thanks very much to everyone for the great feedback so far.
Randyg - I will work on quiet eyes, focus on target ball during final backswing.
Mike - I currently use an open bridge all the time. It's not very common here in Australia to see a closed bridge, perhaps because the pool here has evolved more from snooker. A closed bridge is something I think I want to work on.
Tony - For the video I just used a variety of cue ball position, some stop shots and some follow shots. I'll try out placing the tip at the cue ball before the practice strokes.
Rick - Do you think that is ok where I drop my elbow? I'll try starting with the tip at the cue ball before the practice shots.
Pidge - I'll work on keeping the head still during the final back swing in conjunction with the quiet eyes and focus on target ball. I'll also try walking into the shot.
FranCrimi - I'll take another video with me moving around the table shooting various shots and repost after I've spent some time trying to correct the other issues raised. The place is my local Leagues football club (
www.sharkies.com.au), the drawings on the walls are caricature drawings of famous Australian rugby league football personalities. They have two 7 foot Diamond tables which I try to practice on nearly every day. A friend of mine just bought a reconditioned 9 foot GC3 which we've been playing on once a week.
If any instructors decided to visit Australia and do some coaching while you were here I know I, and a number of other players here in Sydney, that would be very interested. I sure we could take great care of you and show you around.
Failing that I suppose one day I would like to take a holiday in the U.S. and get some coaching while there.
Thanks again and regards,
Herbie.