lol what's with those clothes and that hair?
just kidding.
Looked pretty solid and controlled.
Hard to judge because most of your shots have your arm and elbow out of the camera frame, and often it's in darkness. But the cue ball showed the english you applied.
In one shot it looked like you hit a a ball near the side pocket and drew back to the opposite side of the table. It sounded quite forceful. Almost maybe like you had to use more force than was really necessary to draw a ball 3 or 4 feet. But it's hard to judge that by the sound alone. You may not be hitting the sweet spot on your draw shots though your follow through was fine.
Your bridge looked a little long on some shots and you have a slight chicken wing. Not necessarily enough to worry about. Someone told me I have one and it drove me nuts for a week before I realized it's practically nonexistent. So I feel bad inflicting the same stress on you