Is Schmidt's and charlie 626 Legit

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Tony_in_MD said:
I don't why he wants a virtual event anyway, I seem to remember him saying that virtual events were not valid, because there could be magnets in the rails, hidden panels and other such nonsense.
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An excellent point sir!

That said, you are now employing logic which we all know went bye bye with him a long time ago.
 
Justnum promotes Dan's writing and touts him as a writer. Let's analyze, shall we?

Sample 1
"Included on the second page are blank table layouts. You can use them to track and measure your misses. If you notice the same issue multiple times, then its (sic) likely you have an issue to correct."

Captain Obvious award here. If I were your editor, Dan, I'd encourage you to rewrite this, eliminating the redundancy:

"Included on the second page are blank table layouts. Use them to track and measure misses, and after analyzing them for patterns, focus on correcting the types of shots you miss more often than others."

Sample 2
"Train your mind to recognize common patterns and learn how to play them. Its (sic) called practicing, practice these shots until you mastered them."

First off, are you referencing runout patterns, or patterns representing weaknesses in the student's game? Assuming the latter, to eliminate confusion with the commonly-used word to describe table runout order ("patterns"), I'd rewrite this as:

"Practice to overcome your identified weaknesses until you have mastered them."

If you actually meant fixing shots the student commonly misses, you've already made that point in Sample 1.

If you indeed meant runout patterns, you've mixed your messages.

Dan, I don't agree with the tone and content of most of your posts, but I do applaud you for attempting to create coaching material. Writing well is not as easy as it may seem. Clarity and succinctness are difficult to achieve.

Enough for now. Best of luck as you continue to pursue writing.
 
dquarasr said:
Justnum promotes Dan's writing and touts him as a writer. Let's analyze, shall we?

Sample 1
"Included on the second page are blank table layouts. You can use them to track and measure your misses. If you notice the same issue multiple times, then its (sic) likely you have an issue to correct."

Captain Obvious award here. If I were your editor, Dan, I'd encourage you to rewrite this, eliminating the redundancy:

"Included on the second page are blank table layouts. Use them to track and measure misses, and after analyzing them for patterns, focus on correcting the types of shots you miss more often than others."

Sample 2
"Train your mind to recognize common patterns and learn how to play them. Its (sic) called practicing, practice these shots until you mastered them."

First off, are you referencing runout patterns, or patterns representing weaknesses in the student's game? Assuming the latter, to eliminate confusion with the commonly-used word to describe table runout order ("patterns"), I'd rewrite this as:

"Practice to overcome your identified weaknesses until you have mastered them."

If you actually meant fixing shots the student commonly misses, you've already made that point in Sample 1.

If you indeed meant runout patterns, you've mixed your messages.

Dan, I don't agree with the tone and content of most of your posts, but I do applaud you for attempting to create coaching material. Writing well is not as easy as it may seem. Clarity and succinctness are difficult to achieve.

Enough for now. Best of luck as you continue to pursue writing.
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DANNY isn't writing anything, Justin just decided to human centipede himself to Danny's butt
 
justnum said:
I post a pic with the money and still more character attacks.

If this is what business will be like in the future, its not worth it.
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You didn't expect anyone to believe that was real did you? You have proven how dim you are but c'mon. Even you aren't that dim.
 
Here is our post money. Now do you all want to bullshit and deflect or post the money and set a date to play. Thought I grabbed a 100k out of the safe. I grabbed a 120k so to be fair we will put up 120k to you all's 100k
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