Love story about pool, hustlers, serial killers and some action. Who Am I?

HustlersWife said:
Please be kind. It is a story of one of this world that is gone and my story that has never been told. I am kind. I wasn't during the 8 year stretch I spent in grief, to most people in the pool world I was a complete bitch, I had what is called complicated grief. My intent is to elevate pool. Not only because I write in a cinematic way. I study. I am an artist. I mean no ill will. This can be finished by the spring. I have already reached out to a couple of agents. I am financially secure and am not doing this for money for myself. I want to leave it as a living legacy. I could take down A LOT of people, I choose not to. I did promise just 2 things. One of them is to always love pool. This is my expression, living along with my visual art. I was not present a lot of the time. That is why it reads sideways, I will not put any words into anyone's much. That is for another Tale. I will need it for summer play.
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I love a good story as well as anyone.

But this is not the appropriate venue for your story, as written.

Lou Figueroa
 
I have lived a weird, wonderful atypical life that would have eaten a lesser woman, just so you know. The dissonance just makes my resolve to carry on when I write stream of conscience early in the morning. I see it different.
 
let it go, bitterness isn't a good thing to prolong. maybe he didn't treat you right, he wasn't a charm, but it might have been you.
let it go.
 
maha said:
let it go, bitterness isn't a good thing to prolong. maybe he didn't treat you right, he wasn't a charm, but it might have been you.
let it go.
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He treated ME like an angel. I never had to work. I chose to sometimes. He left me well enough from his knowledge of odds and money management, business sense. I was bitter that he was taken from this earth far too soon. I had to release that through writing. Also, the first story wasn't the polished to perfection piece I had in another folder. I get up drink coffee and go to town typing. So unedited version. And, I apologize for that. You deserved better as a reader. I am rarely online these days. I find it a bore. I do things.
 
maha said:
its a she, and most likely then one we know who posts rarely but tries to be eloquent.
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I don't try, it is authentic. To be clear. If you know any of the people who chatted with me in Jimbo's Army could probably tell. They would say get out your dictionary tizzle is here. They wanted to see a typing competition between me and JAM. I would need a huge spot lol. I can clock the speed based on the type of work she does. Another clue.
 
pwd72s said:
Well, whoever you are, you write well...perhaps a bit of overuse of a thesaurus, but well.
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I don't use a thesaurus. These are all my words. I am extremely well read. I maybe will do two versions. One for pool world and one that will sit on a literary shelf. My studies have found I write like Joan Didion; and it belongs on a shelf. One that someone picks up and gives to a friend and said read this. I study. I think. And thank you for the rare compliment I am finding. I really appreciate that.
 
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