Mr. Lloyd,
I do like your example and I do agree with you on people making it too hard. I dont know what the flyers look like that are promoting the GSBT tournaments, but looking at their website and looking at the entry fees, I can understand how someone could get upset about the prize funds. At no point does it show any money taken out from the entry fee for tour fees, it only shows $10 added to the entry fee for green fees. So if I was to enter that tournament I would assume my entire entry fee would go into a prize fund.
Now why do I assume that! My assumption is that they were making the money needed to do this tour off of sponsors and room owners paying a specific amount which would not require the money taken from the entry fees.
Dont get me wrong, I do agree with the GSBT making money. It is a business and they are selling each person a product in which is a pool tournament. Most pool players are not used to having to pay an "admission fee" so its a learning curve. Now that just means pool players will have to do some research prior to entering a tournament to make sure it is what they want. It also means, that tournament directors will have to supply a well run product or the product will fail quickly and by the looks of things the GSBT is doing a hell of a job because they just broke 100 again.
You talked about simplifying, I would suggest simplifying it even more and just list the gaurentee pay outs for number of paid entrys and not just a gaurenteed payout to first. Now I am talking about a legitimate Tour, not just a monthly tournament because my perspective of a Tour is one that already has a schedule of venues.
Your example of money added and the breakdown of the entry fee is great, but what does that matter if you dont give a breakdown of payout? There is no standard in the pool world on percentage of field payout or what percentage of prize fund each place should receive.
An example of specific payouts on a flyer would be like this.
1-32 players
1st $1,000
2nd $400
3rd $200
4th $100
5/6th $75
33-63 players
1st $1,000
2nd $400
3rd $200
4th $100
5/6th $75
7/8th $60
9-12th $45
13-16th $20
64-80 players
1st $1,000
2nd $600
3rd $400
4th $200
5/6th $100
7/8th $80
9-12th $45
13-16th $20
80-100 players
1st $1,200
2nd $750
3rd $450
4th $250
5/6th $150
78th $100
9-12th $60
13-16th $45