Finally had time to watch the rest of the run up until the 35 min. mark where it became pretty obvious things weren't going to improve.
Few observations. Overall, I think you made some progress with this run. Chalk situation, huge improvement. You forgot at times but really good. If you can stick with it for awhile it won't take long till it's second nature. Keep it in your hand until totally ready to get down and shoot.
Also, much less indecision in the first couple racks. You say you don't see the table good but I think you do ok with that for now. Granted, end patterns could have been better but for now, establishing better rhythm may help more. Get comfortable with that and improving patterns with be easier in the future.
You're a very good shot maker. I'd make 2 suggestions towards consistently running more balls. Get more power in your breakshots. You had 2 really good breakshots (back cuts) that lay good to hit them pretty hard with follow and spread the balls out good. Especially the 9 ball at 26:30. You should have all the balls open after that BS. That alone may have led to a much higher run.
Secondly and by far the harder, is more precise position. That can be a little down the road but will be necessary to get to a higher level.
JMO
