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Episode 10 in the Sharks series is out.
Thank you in advance for watching.
Jim
Episode 10 in the Sharks series is out.
Thank you in advance for watching.
Jim
Sharks episode 10
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Episode Ten
Good Job, Jim. Excellent emotional closing scene. That builds an intense "cliffhanger" type scene that leaves the audience in suspense. My only critique is the detectives emotional scene with Jennifer after she told him to go to hell was a bit long. Perhaps going to a quick cutaway as Jennifer walked off defiantly. Giving more umph to her newfound mistrust of her lover.
Keep Up the Good Work.
cajunfats
Good Job, Jim. Excellent emotional closing scene. That builds an intense "cliffhanger" type scene that leaves the audience in suspense. My only critique is the detectives emotional scene with Jennifer after she told him to go to hell was a bit long. Perhaps going to a quick cutaway as Jennifer walked off defiantly. Giving more umph to her newfound mistrust of her lover.
Keep Up the Good Work.
cajunfats
I just watched it and I have to say that these are getting better. Thanks for your work and that of your actors.
Thank you
Thanks very much. I appreciate the comment. Sometimes when you're in it so much, you can't see the forest from the trees. Although, there are some technical and time problems that keep me from doing some of the things that I would like to do.
Thanks cajunfats,
Jim
Thanks very much. I appreciate the comment. Sometimes when you're in it so much, you can't see the forest from the trees. Although, there are some technical and time problems that keep me from doing some of the things that I would like to do.
Thanks cajunfats,
Jim
Thank You everyone for the nice words. This project has been a lot of fun and a learning experience for all of us. Kudos to Jim and Jennifer for their hard work. They have done a wonderful job.
It has been very difficult for all of us to find the time to meet and film, since everyone has a busy schedule with work, family and of course POOL TOURNAMENTS(priority
)
Looking forward to future episodes :grin-square:
Borana
It has been very difficult for all of us to find the time to meet and film, since everyone has a busy schedule with work, family and of course POOL TOURNAMENTS(priority
) Looking forward to future episodes :grin-square:
Borana
JennBarretta
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Thanks to the people who are watching! It's nice to know that the time we are putting into it isn't going to waste, and it's always nice to hear positive feedback, and/or constructive criticism.
Hope you guys enjoy the future episodes!
Jenn
Hope you guys enjoy the future episodes!
Jenn
Sharks
Keep it coming - I love Jenns character. Wish the series would make it to NBC!!!
Keep it coming - I love Jenns character. Wish the series would make it to NBC!!!
I liked the car ride in the beginning...
Uhh,how about a plug for me??
I could play either of the Ladies Dad/Pool Mentor or even be relegated to an old Pool Hall Bum!! I thought you had my Back, Brotha!!! LOL!!
cajunfats
just for that, I'm posting my Hollywood headshot!!!
Chris, I know you are a fan,as i am of Sharks. However,you could have put in a plug for your old buddy and see if Jim would cast me in a role in the series!?!
I could play either of the Ladies Dad/Pool Mentor or even be relegated to an old Pool Hall Bum!! I thought you had my Back, Brotha!!! LOL!!
cajunfats
just for that, I'm posting my Hollywood headshot!!!
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Dramamine Worthy
Oh yeah, that ride around was worth the price of a box of Dramamine!!
I agree!
I look forward to the next episode.
CSI is proud to help sponsor this . . . . .
And it is getting better and better - BUT I am not sure how you expect to finish this up without the assistance of Carl Semmes!!! (aka Cajunfats)
Mark Griffin
I look forward to the next episode.
CSI is proud to help sponsor this . . . . .
And it is getting better and better - BUT I am not sure how you expect to finish this up without the assistance of Carl Semmes!!! (aka Cajunfats)
Mark Griffin
That Mark Griffin Knows Talent!!!
Thanks again for supporting this project!!
cajunfats/Carl
LMAO!!! Thanks Mark! Maybe I could get Jim to blow me up in a New York Cab in the final scene!! Hahaha,you are the best!
Thanks again for supporting this project!!
cajunfats/Carl
???
OK, are you just joking or are you an actor and are you near New York? I definitely have a part for you if it would work out.
OK, are you just joking or are you an actor and are you near New York? I definitely have a part for you if it would work out.
Ok, I'm so excited about Sharks, I feel a multi-quote is in order.
Jim and crew...Wonderful thing you are doing here. This type of missionary work is exactly what modern pool needs to create the positive ground swell necessary to get out of the ditch and back to that magical place that it once was. If Sharks gets enough viewership it could very well lead to a pilot. If the pilot gets picked up cue sports would rule again like it once did.
And what better setting could you pick other than one of the worlds most renowned rooms? It gives the viewers a peak into not just a pool table but a uniquely lavish space with a intriguing way of life. Once the viewer watches Sharks the zesty vibe will break down the seedy underground myths of pool.
Yes, I agree 100%. More cut aways to the ladies.:happydance:
Thanks B. I'd like to see your character do some evil dastardly shit. Steal some money fromn the cash register, rip someones liver out, bust someone, or brutalize someone in a challege match:woot:
JBar. You are doing a great job and so is the entire cast and crew. And you have a natural talent for acting. Plus, film works pretty good on you as well. :lovies:
You are one handsome man if I can say so myself.:wink:
I'm guessing it's him
Jim and crew...Wonderful thing you are doing here. This type of missionary work is exactly what modern pool needs to create the positive ground swell necessary to get out of the ditch and back to that magical place that it once was. If Sharks gets enough viewership it could very well lead to a pilot. If the pilot gets picked up cue sports would rule again like it once did.
And what better setting could you pick other than one of the worlds most renowned rooms? It gives the viewers a peak into not just a pool table but a uniquely lavish space with a intriguing way of life. Once the viewer watches Sharks the zesty vibe will break down the seedy underground myths of pool.
Yes, I agree 100%. More cut aways to the ladies.:happydance:
Thank You everyone for the nice words. This project has been a lot of fun and a learning experience for all of us. Kudos to Jim and Jennifer for their hard work. They have done a wonderful job.
It has been very difficult for all of us to find the time to meet and film, since everyone has a busy schedule with work, family and of course POOL TOURNAMENTS(priority
Looking forward to future episodes :grin-square:
Borana
Thanks B. I'd like to see your character do some evil dastardly shit. Steal some money fromn the cash register, rip someones liver out, bust someone, or brutalize someone in a challege match:woot:
JBar. You are doing a great job and so is the entire cast and crew. And you have a natural talent for acting. Plus, film works pretty good on you as well. :lovies:
You are one handsome man if I can say so myself.:wink:
I'm guessing it's him
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That's funny..I kind of wondered the "why" of that, since we know
the pool hall setting is Amsterdam billiards.
Otherwise, the plot thickens...much like the cowboy serials at long ago movie theatre Saturday matinee shows. They'd keep you hanging, so you'd hit mom up for the loot to go next saturday. Anybody else here old enough to remember Saturday matinee shows? For sure Borana and Jennifer aren't.
Very enjoyable...staying tuned!
I have to say it again. Jennifer's acting has come a long way since episode one. She is the one natural in the series.
The ending of 10 was a real cliff hanger. Keep em coming, some of us are hooked.
The ending of 10 was a real cliff hanger. Keep em coming, some of us are hooked.
I'll never forget
Cajuns appearance in Party of Five with Neve - historic in the anals of television!!!!
Cajuns appearance in Party of Five with Neve - historic in the anals of television!!!!