Design feedback

3andstop

3andstop

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Waddia think everyone? Honest feedback please ( I realize picture quality is not so good), .... thanks
 

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As a professional in the advertising world I would give you constructive criticism and say, not great try a few other ways. I'll watch and critique the next ones a little more and give some design feed back.
 
Thanks for your feedback SoniDJ 32 views so far, and no one else even bothered to offer an opinion. Nice. Yeah, I was playing with this tee shirt website using the graphics they have available. I'm certainly no designer. :)
 
3andstop said:
Thanks for your feedback SoniDJ 32 views so far, and no one else even bothered to offer an opinion. Nice. Yeah, I was playing with this tee shirt website using the graphics they have available. I'm certainly no designer. :)
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3-man,
I would say its too crude. I've always associated 14.1 with "the game of champions" that existed in the 30's and 40's. Tuxedo's, sportsmanship, elegance, grace, and cerebral play. Make a T-shirt that incorporates those thoughts and I'll take a few.
 
I too think the design is missing something, love the idea to come up with a 14.1 shirt. When the idea is final you can put me down for a XXL.

-Steve
 
I think the logo is not what I would want on my straight pool t shirt.
I also think maybe separate designs for one pocket and straight pool.
 
dmgwalsh said:
I think the logo is not what I would want on my straight pool t shirt.
I also think maybe separate designs for one pocket and straight pool.
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Yeah, I agree with you guys, I suppose the message stemmed from my dislike of 9 ball.

I started playing after I decided to go online and take a look for a few pool related tees. Most are even cornier than mine if you can believe it.

I'll keep playing when I can and post back, thanks for the input.
 
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