After watching another 10 hours of videos I think RandyG is on the money here. When I first saw his response I didn't agree with it, but given I'm the one playing badly right now, I'm in no position to question that and Randy is an excellent instructor.
Tony is right that I do look around, but that's to make certain I can clear the balls with my hand. Because I'm still a little off I'm making too many second guesses. I'm not planning while I'm down on the shot, just gauging the layout.
My arm being bent doesn't affect my shots much, I'm used to playing snooker and having my arm at weird angles. As long as I have a steady bridge I'm generally ok unless it's uncomfortable. It does make a difference to some players, I've just never had a problem with it.
I know I didn't mention everyone's post I just didn't want this to be a novel.
Here's my breakdown of what I see:
video said:
0:13 – Break – Other than the CB popping up I’m happy enough with that for right now. There’s a little elbow drop after contact, but that’s just me trying to get my cue out of the way.
0:52-0:53 – #15 - I can even see the change in my attitude down on this one between talking and shooting. I just look around to make sure my hand clears the balls and quickly check the layout again because I took my eyes off the shot. The stroke itself is near perfect and I’m not jumping up early. I was always playing for a rain-stun onto the #10.
1:12-1:20 - #10 – Happy with that stroke, disappointed though the table ran fast though and my position for the #11 is wasted.
1:33-1:37 - #14/#13 – I changed my bridge length and stance while I was down which is what I see causing me to miss the combo and I moved too much. Still a good stroke and my arm was bent because of the layout of the table. Again, a bent forearm for me is not a big problem but I’ll keep it in mind.
2:42-2:51 - #12/#14 – I’m just sighting in the #14 so I’m not down on the shot. I start to address the CB but I’m not actually down into my stance yet.
2:51-2:56 - #12/#14 – I only stand up on this once the ball is in. When I have someone right behind me I don’t stay down until everything finishes moving. As far as the stroke, I do move up a little on it which bothers me a little.
3:08-3:21 - #13 – I took extra time because I’m balanced on one leg. Stroke is fine and I stay down.
3:27 – My friend was saying something about liking that shot and thinking the game “was over”. I was just pointing out I still had the #12 at one end, the #11 at the other, and the #8 down at the first end. It’s just banter between people but I knew if I didn’t add the caption I’d get questions on what I was pointing at.
3:31-3:41 - #12 – I popped up a little at the end, but the CB is also coming back toward me. The slight pause and head turn is me checking the path to the #11.
4:11-4:15 - #11 – Elbow dropped, I hit just follow because of that instead of high-right which is why I both missed, and hit the obstacle balls.
6:25-6:35 - #11 – Elbow dropped.
7:46-7:55 - #11 – A little unsteady on my feet but the stroke itself is great. The CB ran a little; again the tables are very fast.
8:08-8:10 - #8 – Standing a little upright, but I have to use a nip shot as the CB and OB are close and in case I miss I want the CB in an awkward spot. Stroke is straight.
I missed: 14/13, 11, 11. That might "only" 3 misses, but I’m used to running 2-3 tables. After watching the other videos I've taken since I can see the shots I miss are the ones where I grip the cue too tightly. I hadn't noticed that before so it's something I'll have to go back to.
From the thread:
Stay Focused
Stay Down
Stay Loose (grip)
Go easy on the American (Dr. Dave reference). (I suppose I could have written, "Stay Canadian")
Each time my elbow dropped or I came up, it was when I had a death grip on my cue. It's seeming to be the real cause here unless someone sees anything different.