First, you need to work out a solid preshot routine. Starting with the break, you were fidgeting your body into place after you were down. If you need to adjust, it should be minutely, not as much as you had to. Also, on the break, you ended up hitting the cb way higher than you wanted to. That is due to trying to get max speed instead of control.
On the two, you just kinda slid into place, then only took one warmup stroke. You also never really paid attention to just where you wanted the cb to end up, just a very general area.
Two warmup strokes on the 3, then it looked like a jab or poke at it. Again, no thought on just where you want to put the cb other than a general area.
Three warmup strokes on the 4, then another jab. No finish on the stroke, just rolling the 4 in.
One warmup stroke on the 5, then you just let it fly and hope for position.
One warmup stroke on the 7.
One warmup stoke on the 9, then let it fly. No thought of where to put the cb.
You need a preshot routine. You need to be consistent in what you do. Consistency breeds good playing. Take a little time to look at the table, just where do you want to be for position?? Pick a spot on the table to land the cb on.
Don't just slide into the shot and shift around if you need to. That breeds sloppiness in the rest of the shot. Almost every shot, you start rising the second your tip hits the cb. A few times before contact. When they say it's a race to whatever, they don't mean you have to see how fast you can get there. Slow down a little, and pay attention to what you are doing. At least half the rack you were out of line from not paying attention. Tougher racks will kill you doing that. Good shotmaking though! Work on your follow through also, it's not supposed to be from you standing up and moving the cue forward with your body.