I like the idea and I think the site was organized in a simple, clean way. Easy to navigate.
· Design stuff, hope you won't get mad... it's subjective opinion.
If you say "well I like it the way it is" then I won't be offended.
- When a small image is visibly repeated/tiled many times across a page, it looks a little ugly. The really pro sites seem to keep the tiling effect to a minimum. If you can photograph a much larger section of cloth and tile it subtly, it would look nicer.
- Also not a fan of the font for the header. Courier's not a bad font, but it's built into pretty much every computer. I think it's the windows default for notepad, at least in earlier versions. When you use one of the common, built-in, default fonts on a PC... you can leave the impression that not much thought went into the font choice. People subconsciously think "hey, he just picked that font that comes with windows". Somehow it's not as nice-looking as a similar font that you must find elsewhere.
Example of something similar that is just different enough to look good:
http://new.myfonts.com/fonts/exljbris/museo-slab/500/
(and you don't have to use bevel/emboss/etc)
- While the green gives the page a uniform look... a 2nd color, or variations on the green, would spice the page up and draw attention to the important parts.
http://creedo.gbgl-hq.com/poolplayersdotcom.jpg
· Non-design stuff:
- I'm not a businessman at all but the pricing does seem a touch stiff. And at the same time you could end up getting bitten by it. As someone who's done web pages before, I know you can't just charge 1 price per page. One guy will be content with a name, phone number, and 6 photos... the other guy wants you to set up a virtual shop and forum and blog and 250 photos with linked captions.
Also it's not clear what's meant by members own page. A page that appears inside the left and right navigation bars within poolplayersforhire.com? A totally separate page without any of the other ppfh.com stuff on it, but still under the same domain? Their own domain name?
I might offer plans and packages... 100 bucks for a listing, add 50 for a custom ad/banner you create (or they create and you use)... another 50 for a mini-page with pics, reviews, etc... you get the idea.
- Under the locations header is a link that says "locations" again. Minor oversight I'm guessing, or maybe you were going to make a map or state-by-state listing?